Fic­tion

The Mis­take

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By – May 12, 2025

Is plac­ing a child with a foot in each of two worlds, two cul­tures, two reli­gions a mis­take? That’s the ques­tion author Mara Schiffren sets out to answer in her his­tor­i­cal fic­tion, The Mis­take: The Mar­cus Chron­i­cles, the first book in a series.

The Mis­take is set in the days of Roman Emper­or Hadri­an, who ruled from 117 to 138, and fea­tures Mar­cus, the son of an obser­vant Jew­ish moth­er and a Roman sol­dier father.

Mar­cus is raised by his moth­er to fol­low the rules of Judaism, includ­ing kashrut, at home, while out­side of it, he lives the life of a duti­ful Roman son, being groomed to join the army so he can attain full cit­i­zen­ship, some­thing that would nev­er be open to him oth­er­wise as the son of a Jew.

Mar­cus often finds him­self won­der­ing why and how his war­ring par­ents ever came togeth­er in the first place. By the time he is old enough to notice, they fight con­stant­ly, prompt­ing Mar­cus to think of the bib­li­cal Isaac and Rebec­ca, who bat­tled over which of their two sons would inher­it, and to won­der if they got along at that point.”

But the sto­ry of Isaac and Rebec­ca, a recur­ring theme in The Mis­take, was about twin sons, while Mar­cus is only one boy, con­stant­ly asked to pledge his alle­giance to one side or the other.

What are you, Mar­cus?” he is taunt­ed. Lion or eagle?” And Mar­cus thinks, What was he? Who was he? He had no idea.”

From his mother’s broth­er, Mar­cus learns that there’s a rebel­lion against Rome sim­mer­ing among the Jews that his uncle sup­port­ed tac­ti­cal­ly and financially.”

He is advised, When Hadri­an fails to keep his promise to rebuild the Tem­ple, as we sus­pect he will, we’ll have enough weapons to fight them and take Jerusalem back.”

It’s a fight that will like­ly include Marcus’s father — for the Romans’ side. And, if he goes along with his father’s wish­es, Mar­cus himself.

Mar­cus thinks The tricky thing was that he need­ed to keep pro­tect­ing all three of them… They were three sides of a tri­an­gle. And he was the one keep­ing them aloft.”

As both sides pre­pare for inevitable con­flict, Mar­cus is remind­ed that What serves one’s nation does not always serve one’s family…Be care­ful, lest you find your­self nei­ther in one place nor the other.”

It’s a posi­tion in which many young peo­ple find them­selves today, caught between two worlds, two thou­sand years lat­er, and the ques­tion Schiffren asks is one that The Mis­take: The Mar­cus Chron­i­cles Book 1 only begins to ask, with­out com­ing close to answer­ing. No one has answered it yet.

Ali­na Adams is the NYT best­selling author of soap opera tie-ins, fig­ure skat­ing mys­ter­ies and romance nov­els. Her Regency romance, The Fic­ti­tious Mar­quis was named a first Jew­ish #Own­Voic­es His­tor­i­cal by The Romance Writ­ers of Amer­i­ca. Her Sovi­et-set his­tor­i­cal fic­tion includes The Nest­ing Dolls, My Mother’s Secret: A Nov­el of the Jew­ish Autonomous Region, and the May 2025 Go On Pre­tend­ing. More at: www​.Ali​naAdams​.com.

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