Like Ariana Harwicz’s previous works, Unfit, the latest novel by the prizewinning Argentine author (translated from the Spanish by Jessie Mendez Sayer), dives deep into the mind of its protagonist and refuses to give easy answers to the dilemmas it poses.
Unfit is narrated by Lisa, a mother who has lost custody of her twin sons, J and E; the children have been sent to live with her ex-husband, Armand, and his parents. The ultimate outsider — an immigrant to France, a Jew in a traditionally Christian rural town, and now, a divorcée trying to make ends meet — Lisa will not stop at anything to attempt to reclaim them.
Tortured by her stifling monthly visits, during which Armand chainsmokes in the corner and the social worker takes notes of everything she’s doing wrong, Lisa attempts to overturn the court’s decision. But can she even fight a system that seems rigged against her, the result of generations of racism and injustice, and a society that puts impossible demands on women? This can be seen in the almost comical advice from her state-appointed lawyer: avoid animal prints, wear a light-colored blouse and feminine or plain shoes, don’t lean so far forwards, take off any chains, even the delicate ones, work on softening your expressions and gestures. The fact that these are not indicative of motherly behaviors but mere “virtue signaling” does not seem to bother anyone, including the lawyer, who summarizes the rules of the game: “Number 1: Do not come across as too masculine because you won’t seem maternal enough. Number 2: Do not come across as too feminine, to avoid suggesting a pronounced inclination towards sex or obscenity.”
The book asks difficult questions about maternal love, domestic violence, and the norms that govern our society. Is the system truly rigged against her? Do the villagers that testified against her have the best interests of J and E in mind, or are their actions fueled by xenophobia? Is Lisa driven by motherly love and a sense of sacrifice, or is she proving her detractors right by stalking her children, hiding in trees to observe them outside their school, or disguising herself in the public pool to be near them? Since the story is told exclusively through the inner monologue of the protagonist, without an external account that would provide an unfiltered alternative, the reader must constantly consider other points of view, reconciling elements of both victimhood and culpability that Lisa exhibits.
Harwitz’s style mirrors Lisa’s fractured psychology. There is a sharpness, an urgency to the sentences. Even the typography of the book is tight, breathless. Thoughts cascade without traditional structure, and quotation marks don’t exist, casting a doubt on the accuracy and representation of what is said by others. The boundary between reality and perception constantly shifts. The reader does not merely observe Lisa’s breakdown but experiences it from the inside.
Through fragmented backstory, the reader learns that Lisa and Armand’s relationship was mutually violent — strangling matches, passionate reconciliations, and a toxic dependence that neither could escape. The family’s antagonism toward Lisa, driven by antisemitism, further complicates the picture. And so, with each escalation in the plot, the reader continues to ask: Is Lisa a victim of institutional bias, or is she genuinely dangerous? Perhaps the biggest triumph of Harwicz’s novel is to give such depth to her flawed heroine that the reader feels her desperation. While one can continue to debate her fitness as a mother, Lisa’s actions, however shocking, ring true.
In this short, captivating read, Harwicz offers no resolution, no redemption, no comfort. Readers, however, are rewarded by a work that doesn’t flinch from wrestling with difficult questions, including whether there is a clear border where love and devotion end, and obsession and destruction begin.
Vivian Cohen-Leisorek is a Guatemalan-Israeli writer whose work has appeared in The Tel Aviv Review of Books, BusinessWeek Online, and Underground, and publishes a popular Substack diary about the October 7 War. She currently working on a memoir about her year volunteering with injured soldiers in Israel’s largest hospital.